tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post8779818722705454102..comments2023-08-18T03:14:26.250-05:00Comments on 817 Math (2010): Winnipeg HarvestMr. Hhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07206909417000533833noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-21031890007577410452011-01-30T17:58:20.241-06:002011-01-30T17:58:20.241-06:00Great Job Kyle! I liked how you explained what we ...Great Job Kyle! I liked how you explained what we did at the Winnipeg Harvest and how they helped people, but as what as they all said, check your punctuation and try adding in the pictures that is on Flickr.Trish8-17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07597167741402203439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-48472785665880355432011-01-30T16:53:36.876-06:002011-01-30T16:53:36.876-06:00Good job, Kyle! I liked how you explained what you...Good job, Kyle! I liked how you explained what you did at the Winnipeg Harvest. Next time, add in a few more sentences and check for proper capitalization. Also, add in some pictures. Keep it up!Marie906https://www.blogger.com/profile/11891851049372973271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-52969423981627281072011-01-30T12:45:06.843-06:002011-01-30T12:45:06.843-06:00Good job. I liked how you explaned what you did at...Good job. I liked how you explaned what you did at Winnipeg Harvest and what they do, but next time you should edit your work and add some pictures. Also you should put how you felt after helping out. But otherwise it was good.Tianna.R9-05https://www.blogger.com/profile/04526719175055549404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-11603318774778224732011-01-28T23:23:24.751-06:002011-01-28T23:23:24.751-06:00Good job Kyle! I totally agree with Diorella, try ...Good job Kyle! I totally agree with Diorella, try to check for punctuation, capitalization, and some grammar mistakes too. Also, try to put more effort in to this because I don't see that much (Y). Try to add pictures of you at Winnipeg Harvest. Anyways, keep up the good work.bennette8-17https://www.blogger.com/profile/17732074358413383039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-19828463162470601172011-01-27T18:52:50.744-06:002011-01-27T18:52:50.744-06:00Good job Kyle! Next time try to use proper punctua...Good job Kyle! Next time try to use proper punctuation ( capitals ) And also you could've put a bit more thought into your paragraphs. Keep up the good work.Diorella817https://www.blogger.com/profile/04911106420513859293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7297730787552808859.post-48067679006472948062011-01-25T21:22:25.118-06:002011-01-25T21:22:25.118-06:00Great job Kyle!
I like how you explained what the ...Great job Kyle!<br />I like how you explained what the Winnipeg Harvest is and how they help people. I also liked how you put what people donate. It was also good that you put what you did.Cameron817https://www.blogger.com/profile/09016701190786762991noreply@blogger.com